Book Corrections Page 2:
Here is a complete list of corrections, small and large, to Reading the Enemy's Mind.
See if you find any that aren't here (again, these refer to the hard
back edition; most of these corrections were made in the paperback
p. ix (first page acknowledgments) last line in first para: after
"...enough on the" add corroborating (sentence continues with
"...memories of others...")
p. xii after Dean Radin book reference add following book reference:
Russell Targ and Harold E. Puthoff, Mind Reach: Scientists Look at Psychic Abilities (Hampton Roads Publishing Company, 2005).
p. 2 end of second line, change repeatedly to reportedly
p. 7 3/4 down page (13th line from bottom) change "Much of this
turned out to be mistaken" to "Much of what I thought I knew turned out
to be mistaken"
p. 9 Short para in middle of page. Change "Abruptly, a phone call..." to "Unexpectedly, a phone call..."
p.11 fourth para down, 2nd to last full line, after "The success or failure of..." add "many"
p.12 top line, change "often did it altruistically." to "were often patriots."
p. 20 8th line down, cahnge "worked for an intelligence agency." to "worked in intelligence."
p.24 bottom para, 2nd line, change "150 yards" to "100 yards"
p. 39 para before line break (and thereafter): In the
body of the text all references to book titles are capitalized but not
italicized. Is this standard form? Just wondering!
p.48 3rd full para5th line, after "As a consequence" and a comma and delete "was that"
p.58 First para in Chapter 6, end of 3rd line, change "It is popular to say" to "Some people claim"
p.59 Second full para, first line, change "Dense" to "General"
p.69 third line, it has in parentheses "emphasis in
original." However, there is no emphasis (italics) indicated in the
preceding quoted passage (all words were italicized in the original
source). Perhaps this is a similar situation to the non-italicized book
p.73 eight line down, change "significantly" to "dramatically"
p. 90 eleventh line up from the bottom, remove extraneous hyphen from "sev-eral"
p.91 sixth line down, after "In fact," add "in one of his books, legendary military remote viewer"
also p. 91, middle paragraph, fifth line, change "Remote viewing
protocols are nothing more than..." to "Remote viewing protocols are
p.93 second para, tenth line, another instance of "emphasis in original"
p.103 middle paragraph, sixth line down, change "courses" to "classes"
p.106 first para, last line, change "with a nickname and all." to "with an official nickname and all."
also p.106 second para, third line delete "official "
and change the following sentence to read: "He had some rubber stamps
made ready to slap "GONDOLA WISH" in red ink across the top of any
p.116 paragraph just above line break, third line up, after "thirty-eight" add "either"
p.133 fifth line down, change "Fred let" to "Fred ushered"
p.135 end of second line down, change "be done" to "possibly work"
p.136 para just after middle of page, first line, change "soon" to "eventually"
p.137 to 138 Starting with
second line from bottom, change from "The CIA has been promising since
1995 to release the bulk of the remote viewing programs documentation.
Hopefully, Joe's work will be found among the archives so we can tell
how close he came to the actual facts on the ground." TO:
"After promising since
1995 to release the bulk of the remote viewing program's documentation,
the CIA recently made them publicly available. So far Joe's work has
not turned up, but I hold out hope that someday we will be able to see
just how close he came to the actual "facts on the ground."
also p.138 ninth line from bottom, change "ten-sided die" to "multi-sided die."
p.140 tenth line up, change "Joe" to "Charlene" [this is a relatively crucial change!]
p.142 fifth line down, change "Staring out the window. . ." to "Then, staring out the window. . ."
p.144 second para, seventh line down, change "remember" to "recognize." Tenth line down, change "creative" to "constructive."
p.145 second para, sixth line, add "apparently" before "conducive"
p.148 first full para, second
line from bottom, add "sometimes" before "easier" Seventh line from
bottom, add "ostensible" before "ten percent of their minds"
p.150 eight line down, change ". . .early 1970s Ed. . ." to read ". . .early 1970s he. . ."
In that same paragraph, fifth line up, change "stark, raving mad" to "stark-raving mad"
p.166 second line from bottom, change "treat" to "picnic"
p.169 bottom para, third line down, add "But" in front of "this redifi-"
p.171 second line, add "ad hoc" before "modifications"
p.198 First para under subhead, third line from bottom, delete
"for years"; Move "In Warcollier's writings to front of sentence
that currently starts "Ingo found. . ."
In that same sentence, change "ideas" to "insights."
p.199 Top para, second full line up, delete extra "the."
Next line down, change to read: ". . .standing in the same relation to.
p.203 third full para from top, third line, fix comma spacing.
p.211 Partial line just above sub-head, change to read: "remote viewing sessions of our own."
p.217 second para, starting "Charlene. . ." change "Cavenaugh" to read "Cavanaugh."
p.221 third line from top, change "circumvent" to "get around"
p.287 second para, fifth line, change "with" to "in"
p.299 fifth line from bottom, cahnge ". . .suddenly reupted. . ." to ". . .erupted suddenly. . ."
p.303 fourth line up, delete "the Sun Streak" and replace with "our two old"
p.318 11th line up from bottom -- change "from" to "for"
p.325 top line, remove hyphen in "Kazakhstan"; 10th line down, remove 's' from end of "equipment"
p.334 first para, sixth line down -- after "lectures" add "and monitored some of his first training sessions";
same page, same line, after"handled" delete "the actual
training sessions" and replace with "most of the rest of his practice
same page, same para, but second line up from bottom of
para, change ". . .though, he sometimes. . ." to "...though, Mel
p.338 top line, change ". . .but in 8704. . ." to ". . but for 8704. . ."
p.341 bottom line, second para, change "directed" to "guided"
p.491 eighth line from bottom, change "Besides budgeting. . ." to "In addition to budgeting. . ."
p.506 (Several changes -- follow carefully!
2nd para, fifth line, cahnge ". . .and several others participated. .
." to ". . .and several others had volunteered to participate .
Next para: first line, change "presented" to "gave" and delete "with"
same para, third line: delete "conscious"
same para, change line FROM "La Berge did not know (or at
least pretended not to know) that" TO "La Berge was unaware (or
feigned ignorance) that"
sixth line in same para, after ". . ."government remote viewer was" add "to be"
same para, sixth and seventh lines, delete "of the study"
fourth line up from bottom, same para, after ". . .of the study" add "before doing any sessions."
same para, third line up from bottom, change "experiment was
a reasonable success since. . ." to "experiment was successful since.